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It was a party arranged by Roy Mustang, the new furher. You didn't understand why he would invite someone like you, a young alchemist in training, to such a big party. Nonetheless, you were going to dress to impress.

Slipping on your short, thigh length (fav color) gown, you looked in your mirror. Oh you looked so hot! The men would be drooling over you. You pulled your (hair length/color) hair back in an elegant half up, half down pony tail. You curled in slightly, giving it an even more elegant look. You kept the makeup nutral. Putting some suttle heels on to finish the look, you examined you outfit, very pleased.

When you arrived you couldn't help but look for your crush, Edward Elric. God, he looked hot tonight. He wore a nice suit, wanting to be different and not wear that crumby blue uniform that made anyone who wore it look fat. When he looked your way you quickly lokked away, wondering over to the drink table.

Later in the night, Risa came around. She had a bag in her hand full of different objects. You blink, asking her what it's for.

"Mustang has a little game planned. I'm collecting one item form each person here.... so I need one thing from you, please."

You blink again, finally realizing what game he had in mind. What a perve.....You think for a momant. What the hell? Nothing wrong with a little fun, right? You pulled off your ring your mother had given you and dropped it in the bag. Then Risa left, continuing. You sya her with Edward and watched him put his pocket watch in, rolling his eyes a bit, but also blishing slightly.

when everyone had put something in, Mustang quieted everyone, "Ok, time to play Seven Minutes in Heaven!"

Everyone groaned but had little choice. Things went on, adn when it came down to Risa, she got Mustang.....Somehow, that seemed right. THen Edward stepped up and grabbed something from the bag. When he opened his palm and blinked, "Um, who's (fav gem) ring?"

You blush deeply and raise your hand slowly, "M-mine."

You wanted to choke mustang when you saw him grin widely, and was thankful that no one could read minds.....

Edward's face turned a bit red as well. Once you were both in the closet, it was quiet, which made things a bit awkward.

"S-sorry about all this," Edward said, smiling sheepishly.

You blushed, noticing how close he was to you. He smelled great too. "N-no, it's fine, really."

He looked down at you with his golden eyes. There was something there....something.... hungry?

"Well," he sighed, "I guess we better make this count."

You were about to ask him what he ment until his lips met yours. They were so soft and warm. You found yourself instantly kissing him back. Your emotions took over when he placed his hands on your hips. You wrapped your arms around his neck, bringing him closer. You loved being really really short for once....and being shorter the Ed.

The kiss turned heated as Edward pushed you against the wall, deeping the kiss. His tongue asked for entrance, but you felt liek being a tease and refused. He growled, pinning your arms against the wall now, his leg going between yours. He bit your bottom like, demanding entrance, and yet you still refused, giggling to yourself.

Edward was a bit upset you could tell when he grinded his hips against you, forcing you to gasp. He took his chance and his tongue explored your mouth. Your tongue played with his, enjoying the sweet taste of his mouth. One of his hands released yours, only to slide it up your dress, fingers skimming the sensitive skin of your inner thigh.

You moaned against his lips, whispering, "Edward....I want you....I love you...."

He smiled against your parted lips, "I have waited forever to hear you say that, ___________. I want you too...so bad.....God, I love you."

You were so happy in that moment....ubtil Roy opened the door, laughing his annoying laugh.

"Ok you two, I think that's enough," he laughed again.

You fell even more in love with Edward when you both kicked him at the same time. Before anyone woul;d reacxt, Edward dragged you with him as he walked away.

"Risa.....did you see what they did to me," Mustang pouted, rubbing his shines.

Rise sighed, "You asked for it, Furher."

You both laughed, leaving teh party behind. Edward embraced you, kissing you deeply. You kissed him back, smiling.

He grinned at you, a glint in his eyes, "What do you say we make our own Seven Minutes...or more?~"

You giggled, grabbing his ass. God you had wanted to do that forever! You winked and ran,, calling over your shoulder, "If you can catch me, Fullmetal!"

You both laugh, Edward chasing you. And you couldn't be happier.
Wanted to do this for awhile....finially got it.....thought i wanted to make it longer....i got tired lol.....hope u like it!

i dont own ed, or any FMA characters, and i dont own u......yet XDDD jk jk, chill out
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IrisLam Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Me yelling as i'm running away from Ed: "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSS"
*everyone else in the game look up confused*
Roy: "Did you guys hear something?"
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Rubye402 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015
Corrections:
THen = Then
 liek = like
woul;d reacxt = would react
teh = the
ran,, = ran,
Your welcome. :)
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grimmjowJEAQUERJAQUE Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Me: I touched the booty *is hungry for more* IM THE CRAZED BUTT GRABER hehehe markiplier reference
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Cinderblockderp Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
The crazed butt STABBER. Not GRABBER. That's like saying Pewdiepie invented Tiny box tim, or Haxornova invented 'screw you Billy'
im sorry for being a bitch I just really like making my geeky knowledge known.

i understand why you would hate me
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grimmjowJEAQUERJAQUE Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
.---. bruh 
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
lol butts always good
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grimmjowJEAQUERJAQUE Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
yeah butts are fun to grab cuz they squishy :D
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Bloodstarthecat34 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2015
Swiggity Swooty, Foxy's Comin 4 Booty (Chat Icon) Gotta catch that booty!
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grimmjowJEAQUERJAQUE Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2015  Student Digital Artist
lol great fnaf refrence
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Discardia2 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015
HIGH FIVSE FOR REFERENCES
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grimmjowJEAQUERJAQUE Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Lol
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Discardia2 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2015
:3
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grimmjowJEAQUERJAQUE Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2015  Student Digital Artist
im amazing :D
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Discardia2 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2015
yes you are
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grimmjowJEAQUERJAQUE Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2015  Student Digital Artist
XD lol
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SayaRenee Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015
I think I love you for this complete stranger <3
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
lol well thank you complete stranger ;)
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SayaRenee Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
lol Your welcome Complete Stranger Love 
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2015
lol
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NERDY-PRUSSIA Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Hobbyist
Me: I touched the butt ...... *nosebleed to death *
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
 your welcome lol
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AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Delilah: W-well...I-I...umm...*tail goes straight* Oh, great.  Whelp, I'm going to go get rid of this tail boner now.  *walks away with a straight tail and dirty thoughts*
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
lol
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015   Writer
yay the truth has come! im shorter! XD no but really... 4'9 -.-
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
oh my....and I thought I was short...well short ppl have more fun ;)
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Cinderblockderp Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
Wait... Did you just imply I'm short.....

*twitches*

WHO ARE YOU CALLIN A MIDGET SO TINY SHE CAN ONLY BE SEEN WITH A MAGNIFYING GLASS YOU JERK?!
ILL BREAK DOWN YOUR FEET AND STICK 'EM ON YOUR HEAD!!!
CALL ME A MICROSCOPHIC BEANSPROUT AGAIN I DARE YOU!
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Cinderblockderp Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
I'm 4"6  ;-;
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015   Writer
XD yup
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UmbreonPlanet Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015
I wonder how I am running in high heels, heck, I would trip even if I was walking at a turtles pace! XD
Also, I loved this fan-fic. so much! X3 *Blood runs out of nose like a waterfall*
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
lol good point. and thank you
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Ryame-Yuki Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh...Oh my! Um...this is good! yea..um..*blushes* yea
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
XD lol your welcome
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Ryame-Yuki Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD Why are you saying your welcome....? O.o
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Ryame-Yuki Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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KikoOhamachi2 Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I swear I had a real life nose bleed...This story made me so happy! I wonder how my cousin (Todd Haberkorn) would think about this....Pinkie Pie Free icon Pinkie Pie Free icon Pinkie Pie Free icon Pinkie Pie Free icon Pinkie Pie Free icon Pinkie Pie Free icon Pinkie Pie Free icon 
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
lol you're welcome ;)
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KikoOhamachi2 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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anime-lover229 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVED IT *NOSEBLEEDS AND FANGIRLS SCREAMS AND FAINTS*
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
^^ thank yoooou!
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anime-lover229 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome
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SakuraStar10311 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
MY QUEST HAS FINALLY COME TO AN END *nosebleeds* :nosebleed: 
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015
lol glad I could help ;)
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wolfloverQ Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Omg you have got to make more of these!!!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015
I may lately I have been busy with life, working and planning my wedding. but perhaps, one may come out soon when im bored and need to write again :)
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wolfloverQ Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
That would be amazing, and congratulations!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
thank you ^^
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MoonGoddessRein Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
>\\\\\\\<
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FlashKittyStudios Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This was the first fan fiction ever to actual make me have a nosebleed.

Oh my...
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
lol well that is a tremendous compliment ^^ thank you so much lol
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Kyokotoshino Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
U actually had one I've read much more romancy stuff and it hasn't happend to me
but the second I saw the title of this I was like yes yes yes yes
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