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It was a party arranged by Roy Mustang, the new furher. You didn't understand why he would invite someone like you, a young alchemist in training, to such a big party. Nonetheless, you were going to dress to impress.

Slipping on your short, thigh length (fav color) gown, you looked in your mirror. Oh you looked so hot! The men would be drooling over you. You pulled your (hair length/color) hair back in an elegant half up, half down pony tail. You curled in slightly, giving it an even more elegant look. You kept the makeup nutral. Putting some suttle heels on to finish the look, you examined you outfit, very pleased.

When you arrived you couldn't help but look for your crush, Edward Elric. God, he looked hot tonight. He wore a nice suit, wanting to be different and not wear that crumby blue uniform that made anyone who wore it look fat. When he looked your way you quickly lokked away, wondering over to the drink table.

Later in the night, Risa came around. She had a bag in her hand full of different objects. You blink, asking her what it's for.

"Mustang has a little game planned. I'm collecting one item form each person here.... so I need one thing from you, please."

You blink again, finally realizing what game he had in mind. What a perve.....You think for a momant. What the hell? Nothing wrong with a little fun, right? You pulled off your ring your mother had given you and dropped it in the bag. Then Risa left, continuing. You sya her with Edward and watched him put his pocket watch in, rolling his eyes a bit, but also blishing slightly.

when everyone had put something in, Mustang quieted everyone, "Ok, time to play Seven Minutes in Heaven!"

Everyone groaned but had little choice. Things went on, adn when it came down to Risa, she got Mustang.....Somehow, that seemed right. THen Edward stepped up and grabbed something from the bag. When he opened his palm and blinked, "Um, who's (fav gem) ring?"

You blush deeply and raise your hand slowly, "M-mine."

You wanted to choke mustang when you saw him grin widely, and was thankful that no one could read minds.....

Edward's face turned a bit red as well. Once you were both in the closet, it was quiet, which made things a bit awkward.

"S-sorry about all this," Edward said, smiling sheepishly.

You blushed, noticing how close he was to you. He smelled great too. "N-no, it's fine, really."

He looked down at you with his golden eyes. There was something there....something.... hungry?

"Well," he sighed, "I guess we better make this count."

You were about to ask him what he ment until his lips met yours. They were so soft and warm. You found yourself instantly kissing him back. Your emotions took over when he placed his hands on your hips. You wrapped your arms around his neck, bringing him closer. You loved being really really short for once....and being shorter the Ed.

The kiss turned heated as Edward pushed you against the wall, deeping the kiss. His tongue asked for entrance, but you felt liek being a tease and refused. He growled, pinning your arms against the wall now, his leg going between yours. He bit your bottom like, demanding entrance, and yet you still refused, giggling to yourself.

Edward was a bit upset you could tell when he grinded his hips against you, forcing you to gasp. He took his chance and his tongue explored your mouth. Your tongue played with his, enjoying the sweet taste of his mouth. One of his hands released yours, only to slide it up your dress, fingers skimming the sensitive skin of your inner thigh.

You moaned against his lips, whispering, "Edward....I want you....I love you...."

He smiled against your parted lips, "I have waited forever to hear you say that, ___________. I want you too...so bad.....God, I love you."

You were so happy in that moment....ubtil Roy opened the door, laughing his annoying laugh.

"Ok you two, I think that's enough," he laughed again.

You fell even more in love with Edward when you both kicked him at the same time. Before anyone woul;d reacxt, Edward dragged you with him as he walked away.

"Risa.....did you see what they did to me," Mustang pouted, rubbing his shines.

Rise sighed, "You asked for it, Furher."

You both laughed, leaving teh party behind. Edward embraced you, kissing you deeply. You kissed him back, smiling.

He grinned at you, a glint in his eyes, "What do you say we make our own Seven Minutes...or more?~"

You giggled, grabbing his ass. God you had wanted to do that forever! You winked and ran,, calling over your shoulder, "If you can catch me, Fullmetal!"

You both laugh, Edward chasing you. And you couldn't be happier.
Wanted to do this for awhile....finially got it.....thought i wanted to make it longer....i got tired lol.....hope u like it!

i dont own ed, or any FMA characters, and i dont own u......yet XDDD jk jk, chill out
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wolfloverQ Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member
Omg you have got to make more of these!!!
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MoonGoddessRein Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
>\\\\\\\<
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FlashKittyStudios Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This was the first fan fiction ever to actual make me have a nosebleed.

Oh my...
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
lol well that is a tremendous compliment ^^ thank you so much lol
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Kyokotoshino Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  New member
U actually had one I've read much more romancy stuff and it hasn't happend to me
but the second I saw the title of this I was like yes yes yes yes
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FlashKittyStudios Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Heh. There is a first for everything~
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I love reading this time and time again. It's a really good story!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
aww thanks ^///^
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allycat2014200310 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Student Artist
Me:if you can catch me fullmetal!
Ed:WHAT THE HECK ABIGAIL!
Me:hahaha😆
Ed:😐*kisses*
Me:0/////0
Ed:hahaha in your face!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
lol XD
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AtreiyuPhantomhive Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Professional Writer
*stares at the pile of millions of empty tissue boxes on the floor by my computer* :iconinuloveplz:
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
;) you're welcome
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OHSHCFREAK01 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Student Artist
I have the nosebleed of all nosebleeds
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Kyokotoshino Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  New member
That really happens
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
>hands a tissue<
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fmageek77 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
s/he needs more than one tissue. *hands 3 boxes*
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
lol
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AkwardHeart Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaa! This made me melt...... ALOT!!! 0///0
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
;) you're welcome
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RyuzakiSusanuma Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Artist
ok i would like to say tha-BoF: Faint 
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
lol ;)
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RyuzakiSusanuma Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Student Artist
Cx
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BlitzLynx Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I almost died reading this.
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
don't die! DX
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BlitzLynx Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*dead* *_*
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
nuuu if you die who will read my stories! DX lol
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BlitzLynx Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
* comes back to life*
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
yay!
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BlitzLynx Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this reader so damn much I can read this all day!!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
lol thank you I think lol
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Vamp104 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There is a lot of spelling mistakes!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
didn't ask for spell check :/ you miss the point. The point is not the spelling but the story. Don't like the spell mistakes, don't read.
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Vamp104 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry your story is amazing even with the spelling mistakes!
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I AM HAVING A NOSE BLEED!!!!!!!!!!!
GYAAAAAAAAAAAH LOLOLOL

Lol... Can't believe I would grab his ARSE but oh we'll.....I still loved it:))
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
lol thanks
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol this was really fun to read! I loved it!
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animefreak200228 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
me: reads this in my room
*Edward walks in*
Edward: Hey luna what are you up to
me: *quickly shuts off laptop* O-OH HEY THERE
Edward: what were you reading
me: NOTHING
Edward: *grabs laptop and reads*
Me: NOOOOOO!!!
Edward: *grabs me and shoves me in a closet with him*

I'll leave the rest to your imagination........
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
me: *hears slam of door* *thud against wall* GET SOME!!!
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animefreak200228 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Writer
me: oh god...

Edward: heheheheheh
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
me: XD hahaha
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animefreak200228 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student Writer
I LOVE YOUUUUUU and your profile pic. SOLLLL~
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Alphonse Elric Al (Shy) [V1] th-thanks.....
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animefreak200228 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Writer
stop being so adorabloodthirsty
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angel-ultimate Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Priceless!!! XD
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animefreak200228 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Writer
hehe thanks!!
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angel-ultimate Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
No prob!
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animefreak200228 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student Writer
hehe~
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how u do comments like this and than say at the end "I'll leave the rest to your imagination" lol priceless hahaha.
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animefreak200228 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Writer
cause then it can go how you want it to be: a little lemon or a lot and you could make a fanfic out of it witch is even better!
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